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All right sy Writing bumpers another section for you modifying

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phrases closet logical transitions and a whole bunch of stuff

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Okay here we go Aurora is hard working and responsible

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whereas her sister jane tends to procrastinate Rewrite this thing

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with wild jane tends to procrastinate comma and dot dot

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dot Yeah okay well let's think about this Most of

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us will at some point or another procrastinate way were

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an am crashed in ator and then we got paid

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for crashed in ating so we turned however there are

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some rare folks who always managed to stay on top

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of everything This sentence shows a contrast between jane who

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pro crashed innate and aurora who does not what we

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bet their parents never bring up that fact at all

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In the original sense the word whereas signifies contrast the

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rewritten sense replaces whereas with while so we don't need

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to repeat whereas right between the remaining choices were looking

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for the one that includes her sister So the relationship

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between two girls isn't left out so the answer here

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is sea While jane tends to procrastinate her sister aurora

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does not she's awesome way Dont want to select an

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option that fails to mention important information about their relationship

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like in a and also nick's any option that repeats

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whereas got it that's it The answer is c her 00:01:25.207 --> [endTime] sister aurora shmoop

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