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Which of the following sentences is best to insert between sentences 11 and 12?
Transcript
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five here Obviously you have rick's altering the maintained because
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i stayed in my email visit in your charming job
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My husband i went there and don't make him a
- 00:14
one ton of been like in context Which of the
Full Transcript
- 00:19
following sentences is best to insert between sentences eleven and
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twelve right here So we're going to put this thing
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in between eleven and twelve I called north shore animal
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league the next day I was very upset All right
- 00:39
we'll simply stating that mona spoke with the adoption counsellor
- 00:43
about the issue it's perfectly no muss no fuss and
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most importantly no repetition Yeah so that's where it should
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go is between eleven and twelve way don't like to
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repeat ourselves We repeat we don't like to repeat ourselves
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saying the same thing over and over and over again
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since eleven tells us that mona called the north shore
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animal league sends twelve tells us that she was very
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upset but we already know both of these things so
- 01:08
there's no need to repeat him like a and c
- 01:11
would have ugo repetitions Not the only issue here though
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as we also want to insert a sense that maintains
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the same tone and voices sentences around it So get
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rid of bia's Well that's just weird so the answer
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is d i spoke with the adoption counselor about this
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issue between sentences Eleven well get your shoehorn and shove 00:01:28.266 --> [endTime] it right in there
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