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Where would the following sentence best be placed?
Which of the following is best to insert at the beginning of sentence 8?
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TSI Writing: "I" vs. "You" 9 Views
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Description:
Select the best version of the italicized part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
If you apply to the online
college, I should
hear from the admissions office within a month.
Select the best version of the italicized part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose the first answer.
If you apply to the online
college, I should
hear from the admissions office within a month.
Transcript
- 00:03
Okay see editing shmoop er's Here we go it's dive
- 00:06
in If you apply to the online college like the
- 00:09
one i should hear from the admissions office within a
- 00:13
month if you apply i should hear is like big
- 00:17
brother the nsa Are you listening way love you guys
Full Transcript
- 00:20
high and say people yeah we're good We're all good
- 00:24
right Ok Well whenever we use pronouns they want to
- 00:29
make sure they stay consistent Sorry We want to make
- 00:33
sure that we stay consistent What happens when we don't
- 00:36
stay on top of those pronounce the sentence begins with
- 00:39
the second person pronoun you by shifting the first person
- 00:43
pronoun i we lose sight of who exactly is hearing
- 00:46
from the admissions office Yeah not the nsa Staying consistent
- 00:50
means using the same pronoun so that nobody gets lost
- 00:53
and that pronoun is you So that it's the college
- 00:57
you should and and that's it We're shmoop check out
- 01:00
shmoop university if you want to someday dr for ups
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