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TSI Writing: Revising a Text to Remove Author's Bias 3 Views
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Which of the following revisions omits the author's bias from sentence 10?
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- 00:03
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- 00:09
right into it and skipping the text later In context
- 00:12
which of the following revisions omits the author's bias from
- 00:16
sentenced tend right Since ten was right there I'm all
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- 00:20
for the coming partnerships so he's saying i'm i'm for
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the murder of mick high school right So which of
- 00:28
these omits the bias We want something neutral so a
- 00:36
is clearly not coming partnership are really smart partner to
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run around The only way to go way try would
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offer students many benefits Okay we'll see is pretty neutral
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relatively there we would be turning down a great opportunity
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for you all right Those are all political statements there
- 00:50
other than si well this is something we all have
- 00:53
most of shmoop family are particularly bias toward shiny objects
- 00:56
and baked goods with chocolate price isn't something that should
- 01:00
necessarily be broadcast loudly in an essay though a little
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implied bias goes a long way as it is less
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likely to alienate readers Read the new york times the
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wall street journal and you get a grip there a
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statement such as i'm all for it can be revised
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into a statement that supports the claim such as well
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it offers many benefits Yeah this is an objective fact
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without the color of any bias so see it is
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and loser bull you know all the rest of these
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air clearly biased statements you'd expect to read them in
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a you know in a newspaper similar so that's it 00:01:35.466 --> [endTime] we're done we're shmoop chrissy
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