ShmoopTube
Where Monty Python meets your 10th grade teacher.
Search Thousands of Shmoop Videos
Test Prep Videos 4004 videos
ACT English: Punctuation Drill 1, Problem 3. Is that comma being used correctly?
CAHSEE Math: Algebra and Functions Drill 5, Problem 3. Solve the equation.
CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Strategies. Which of the following sentences, if placed before sentence 1, would be the most effective introductory sentence?
Texas EOC English 2: 4.2 Revision 206 Views
Share It!
Description:
Want to pull an Oliver Twist and ask us for more? We've gotcha covered. Click on this link for more Texas EOC goodness. Porridge not included.
Transcript
- 00:00
Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du
- 00:06
jour brought to you by pediatricians though the receptionist will
- 00:09
not give you a lollipop that's our perception that she's
- 00:12
being if any come on be nice All right my
- 00:15
plans for the future for skimming when i graduate medicine
Full Transcript
- 00:21
has become doctors long good thing this gal is not
- 00:24
to be a writer alright in sentence Five maria wants
- 00:28
to say that she would attend the best college that
- 00:30
except sir but scholarship money will be a factor in
- 00:32
her decision to which of the following revisions best accomplishes
- 00:36
that purpose and here's a potential answers shmoop Well so
- 00:43
we need a sentence that gives us the low down
- 00:45
on maria's college selection priorities Here's a big sense i
- 00:49
will attend the best one i get accepted to grammar
- 00:52
police please and we'll of course consider the receipt of
- 00:55
scholarship money too Well basically she wants to go to
- 00:58
the best place that accepts her but she's also going
- 01:01
to take into account the scholarship money offered we recommend
- 01:04
she take that scholarship money into serious accounts Loans will
- 01:07
eat our souls Trust us people it's gonna be over
- 01:10
don't even bother All right Wilby doesn't work because it
- 01:13
makes it sound like maria's on ly taking scholarship money
- 01:15
into consideration Maybe she should be doing that But she's
- 01:18
not again Student loans will eat our souls get them
- 01:21
out of here See doesn't work because it's phrased kind
- 01:23
of awkwardly it makes it sort of sound like scholarship
- 01:26
money is the most important thing to maria minutes says
- 01:28
she'll only go to the one that gives her the
- 01:30
most money If it's the best is too convoluted Next
- 01:34
place is the closest so far because it balances maria's
- 01:37
priorities But it's really wordy an awkward and like this
- 01:41
time for all that next choice is the right answer
- 01:43
because it clearly communicates maria's priorities We have a joke
- 01:47
that might help maria adjust her priorities though Here you
- 01:49
go knock knock who's there student loans student loans What
- 01:55
my soul my soul yeah really your soul here's like
- 01:58
be able to get all the money you borrow your
- 02:00
promising to pay back They don't even bother with ketchup
Related Videos
Can you find the important difference between "Old Mistresses Apologue" and "Suggested Husbands for Fanny Burney"? Unfortunately, the answer isn't...
Time to show off your strength like Rosie the Riveter! ....Er....sorry. Not by flexing your arms. That won't help you much with this question. Why...