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CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Strategies. Which of the following statements is supported by details or evidence from the student's draft?
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- 00:00
Hurry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
- 00:05
by generous elves They got a tax write off though
- 00:09
So think twice before you send a thank you card
- 00:12
Okay we read about santa claus Frolicsome varies They work
- 00:19
here All right Which of the following statements is supported
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- 00:23
by details or evidence from the students draft And here
- 00:27
the potential danger Shmoop okay well this one requires direct
- 00:35
evidence from the passage so unless we have every word
- 00:37
brandon our brains that might be good idea to refer
- 00:40
back to the essay so choice b looks promising right
- 00:42
off the bat but it doesn't quite make the cut
- 00:45
the narrator does say i hope that i feel better
- 00:47
about things as i get older but overall the essay
- 00:50
is pretty pessimistic Most of the passengers about how magic
- 00:53
isn't real and lots of bad things happen in the
- 00:55
world plan only had a general self to send this
- 00:58
kid's way All right well next we'll get rid of
- 01:01
choice See there are a couple of sentences about trying
- 01:03
to wish magical things into existence over the narrator quickly
- 01:07
burst that hopeful bubble when he or she says but
- 01:10
i'm finding that i'm too old to believe anymore even
- 01:13
when i tried to option d doesn't work either The
- 01:16
narrator is clearly talking about how he or she used
- 01:19
to read a bunch of fairy tales as a kid
- 01:21
we never told that he or she is still staying
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up all night reading them with a flashlight on sheets
- 01:26
however and that's good Because that would be super annoying
- 01:29
toe his a roommate in college trust us we've been
- 01:31
there Joyce is the best answer in the second paragraph
- 01:35
in narrator directly mentions all the depressing headlines he or
- 01:38
she reads War scandals death This kid is up to
- 01:42
date on all the terrible things the world has to
- 01:44
offer and i haven't even seen the new ford fiesta
- 01:46
coming out Trust me Maybe they should spend some time
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watching that cable news network that only reports the good
- 01:53
things that happen in the world Uh no wait that 00:01:55.921 --> [endTime] doesn't exist
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