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Which of the following supporting details would not elaborate on sentence 15?
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- 00:03
Okay sy writing shmoop furs last in this siri's let's
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Just get down to it in context Which of the
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following supporting details would not elaborate on sense Fifteen so
- 00:13
fifteen it's like way down here top since in the
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last paragraph Yeah right there While we cannot always change
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- 00:19
or eliminate the things that trigger stress in our lives
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we could make a conscious effort to change our behaviors
- 00:25
in response to them Okay interesting Well let's think here
- 00:29
and we're skimming and we're skimming what looks good to
- 00:31
us Well think about it One of these things is
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not like the other Get rid of the option that
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doesn't offer any concrete support right Not only is avoiding
- 00:41
stressful situations vague but also is impossible for someone to
- 00:45
avoid all stressful situations or change every circumstance So it's
- 00:50
Not stressful So the answer's got to be the right
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there We can avoid stressful situations or change the circumstances
- 00:56
that induce or cause stress Yeah it's how we know
- 00:59
that the conclusion of this essay is a little flimsy
- 01:02
right By adding some details it can be more informative
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in descriptive putting limits on or refusing new responsibilities definitely
- 01:09
Helped to change the triggers of stress Right Seeing a
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there Get rid of that as we're taking care of
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our bodies be sure of that They also like our
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quiet time in visits with friends so this would get
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added to the paragraph as well So fancy and that's
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it it's d and we're done with this action Lu 00:01:24.825 --> [endTime] of the who yeah there were shmoop
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