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There's a change that needs to be made in this question. But students today? They're pretty darn smart. And their brains will surely help them figu...
Pay close attention and see if you can define "meticulously."
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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du
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jour brought to you by electron ix But you're looking
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at this on a computer so well you knew that
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All right check the following passage Lina's Teacher Hidden hazards
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of electronic way we're reading or skinny Fascinating No Ok
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And we're done selina's thesis will be more clearly established
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if she revised his sentence for teo Say what And
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here the potential answers let's kick this off by taking
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another deep lookit sentenced for and senses around it all
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right well the original structure is in great because all
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it says is that electronics create health risks big wood
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What it fails to say is how or what kind
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of risks they create That makes the next sense about
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recycling and seem a little out of place after all
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If electronics are dangerous because they might zap you recycling
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won't help Maybe you'd be better investing in a rubber
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suit if this is your main concern all right choice
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a and b won't work for the same reason Yeah
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we get it Electronics are dangerous but like why Because
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they might gain self awareness and join the robot revolution
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Well the reader might assume anything of salina doesn't specify
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Joyce d tells us that degrading electronics are health risks
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which does tie into the sense about recycle but it
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sounds awkward The following sentence three next choice see is
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the best answer here it links to sentence Three by
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mentioning that the elektronik are for gotten and it connects
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that sentence five by saying that the electron its air
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left to degrade in a landfill So this version of
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the sentence builds the best bridge between three and five
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creating a solid main idea Now excuse us while we
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go Make sure our smartphones haven't become self aware you 00:01:49.141 --> [endTime] laugh But siri has been unusually sassy lately No
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