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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop too
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sure brought to you by the navy Good thing walter
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didn't know karate He might have lost the top of
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his head with the first salute That can happen I
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check out the following passage on we're reading skimming in
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hero nineteen Twenty a small fire mode Okay what's The
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most effective revision to make in sentence seven and hear
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the potential answers You mean all right Well so the
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original sense gives us two key pieces of info Walter
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received several important medals of honor during world war two
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and he served in the navy from nineteen Forty one
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in nineteen Forty five Awesome but there's problem here with
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the order of information it makes way more sense to
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say that walter was in the navy and then to
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bring up the part about the medals of honor Otherwise
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we're left wondering for a hot sec where walter got
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the medals like magic claw machine or maybe ebay He
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does the same thing as the original sense but it
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tries to look cooler by using a semicolon correctly that
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an emoji for winking well sorry b were not impressed
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Here the order of information is the most important thing
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Yeah he makes the same mistake all over again Look
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seriously we need some context before we start talking about
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these medals of honor If walter's mom had just given
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him some medals of honor all she made from bottle
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caps while that wouldn't be too impressive now what Yeah
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option c finally gets the order of information right but
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then it gives us some seriously long qi phrasing so
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there will be no medals of honor for this Joyce
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Well a's the best answer First we hear about walter
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joining the navy and then we hear about those medals
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of honor If we want a medal of honor well
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wear a t shirt with a picture of us wearing
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the medal of honor and then we probably wear the
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medal of honor on top of that shirt Too much 00:01:44.206 --> [endTime] Forget it you still do it
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