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CAHSEE ELA: Writing Strategies Drill 2, Problem 3. Which of the following sentences would best introduce the draft?
CAHSEE ELA 2.4 Writing Strategies. Which is the best way to revise sentence 1?
CAHSEE ELA 3.2 Writing Strategies. Which sentence does not relate to the main idea of paragraph 2?
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CAHSEE ELA: Writing Conventions Drill 4, Problem 5. How would you correct the sentence, if at all?
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Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by the future Perfect Wishful thinking if you ask us
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But that's a tense issue Hortense issue whatever All right
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which answer best fills in the blanks when they get
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home from their trip they will be gone for seventeen
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days I knew a potential answers in the navy The
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problem with this ends is that the verbs disagree No
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amount of mediation is going to help this one We
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need to find some verbs who know how to get
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along So the sentence gets off with a future tense
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verb get so we know that the second part of
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the sentence needs a future tense verb as well Knowing
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this makes it easy to get choices Bnc out of
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our lives goodbye were gone and had been gone are
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both in the past If this were doctor who it
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might make sense to talk about someone from the future
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going back into the past And still he does that
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a lot on family guy but well same ideal more
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modern versions But as far as we know the people
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on this trip aren't lords of time That would be
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cooler if they were option details as to leave the
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original sense alone but it's got the wrong end of
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the stick Yes will be is in the future tense
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like our first verb get but in this sense the
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future isn't so simple We're talking about something that will
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have happened before a certain point in the future when
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these travellers return seventeen days will have already passed To
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get across this idea we need choice A which takes
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us into the future with the helping word will but
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uses have been to bring us back a bit in
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time Whenever we're dealing with this kind of time frame
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we're in a tense called the future perfect I don't
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think we can only talk about the good things to
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come in this tense For example by the time we
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finish this sentence to zombies will have attacked that or 00:01:50.351 --> [endTime] sharpen your machete low cholesterol brains for sale
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