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ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 5, Problem 15. Would this essay have fulfilled the goal described in the video?

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Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by phylum arthropoda.

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When spoken by a wizard, these magic words cause an orthopedic mattress to appear.

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Check out the following passage...

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Suppose the writer had intended to write a brief essay addressing how our ideas about

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spiders often do not have much basis in reality.

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Would this essay successfully fulfill the writer's goal?

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And here are your potential answers...

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So the question is basically asking whether or not this essay helps debunk popular myths about spiders.

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We like the one where the spider rides a flying horse to Mt. Olympus.

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Hm, maybe we’re confused on that one.

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(D) is incorrect because the type of spider mentioned doesn't have much to do with what

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the question is asking.

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(D), we’re seriously going to need you to try a little harder next time.

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Choice (B) is wrong as well.

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The writer comes in with a pretty extensive knowledge of spiders.

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He or she spends most of the essay showing off that knowledge,

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not learning new things. We wonder if that kind of knowledge is impressive on dates.

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Probably not.

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Option (A) claims that this essay does a great job of debunking the idea that spiders often

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get trapped in their own webs.

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However, the essay actually points out how most people know that spiders don’t normally

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get caught in their webs, and they wonder how spiders manage this trick.

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This is pretty much exactly what choice (C) tells us, making (C) the correct answer.

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It’s widely known that any spider who reveals his secret will be

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expelled from the sacred order of arachnids.

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