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ACT English: Punctuation Drill 2, Problem 2. Where should the semi-colon be placed?
ACT English: Punctuation Drill 2, Problem 3. Where does the semicolon fit best?
ACT English: Punctuation Drill 3, Problem 1. How should this sentence be changed so that it is grammatically correct?
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ACT English: Punctuation Drill 1, Problem 3. Is that comma being used correctly?
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- 00:03
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- 00:07
I have always wanted to go to the bird estuary, observing wild birds in their natural habitat
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is a passion of mine.
- 00:27
First of all, this thing sounds like two sentences. When you use a comma to join two independent
- 00:32
clauses, or sentence pieces... it's called a comma splice.
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- 00:36
So, let's if we can find another answer with a better way to combine these two clauses.
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What about B? This time, the two sentences are joined with the word and.
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And is a conjunction, and their buddy is the comma,
- 00:48
and they're pretty much inseparable
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when they join independent clauses.
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For the sentence to be grammatically correct,
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it needs a comma. But beyond that, it doesn't really make
- 00:57
sense to use "and" here. Let's see if we can find a more natural conjunction in another
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sentence. C... no way, no how. There's no conjunction...
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D looks much more promising. It uses "because" as a subordinating conjunction.
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Notice "because" works better than and, because the second clause explains the first
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one pretty well. So the answer is D.
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And hey, if you get it wrong, you can always try bribing the ACT test administrators with
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tickets to that bird estuary...
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