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PSAT 1.26 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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by the national endowment for the arts No wonder the
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arts or write so well and out All right check
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out this passage right here Any a nancy angstrom management
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All right Take a look at the line from the
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passage Right there Until that point the two agencies had
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shared staff for budget finance and personnel management How would
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you change the underlying portion if it all And here
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the potential answers and yachting All right well it appears
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that this sense is having colon issues Maybe he overdid
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it on the jalapeno popper All right Well let's look
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at our answer choices for a second here Three of
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them have something in common A colon is the odd
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one out The only one that seems to think we
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can get away without using one So who's right Do
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we need a colon or can we blow it right
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out of our way List of options Well let's consult
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the old dictionary Oh punctuation A colon must always follow
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a complete thought and is used to separate the first
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clause either from a list of clarifying items or from
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a second related claws though according to that definition how
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do our answer choices stack up Can we leave sense
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as is no if the first claws were a complete
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thought it wouldn't end in a word for that word
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really tends to leave him hanging can't be option it
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What about be putting the colon after the word point
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double note until that point is definitely not a complete
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thought So for the same reason we next b our
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last hope for all colon kind is that sea is
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the right answer and we plunkett colon after the word
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shared er once again we've got an incomplete thought Sharing
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what well taken by itself the claws prior to the
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colon just doesn't make any sense If we were desperate
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to use a colin we could phrase the sense this
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way Until that point two agencies had shares after three
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departments holen budget finance and personnel management but it isn't
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really necessary Option d which just ditches the colon completely
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is the best way to go here We'd suggest you
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don't bother option d for at least a few hours
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We know how irritable we can get after at our 00:02:08.525 --> [endTime] colon cleanse
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