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CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
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Sorry And here's your smoke du jour brought to you
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by verb tenses because verb relaxes just weren't feeling up
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to it Yeah How do you correct the following sentence
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If it needs correcting it all Jackson a his birthday
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cake after his family saying happy birthday to him aren't
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here no answer this question correctly We have to be
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cool with verb tenses which can be hard These guys
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are up today is first on our agenda What we
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have here is an example of past Perfect tense right
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here We can spot this tense easily because it uses
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helping words like had or have when talking about the
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past The other thing to know about past perfect is
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that it's used to refer to something that happened before
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something else in the past He little timeline here this
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happen before this This letter says cross off choice eh
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Since the sentence clearly tells us that jackson devoured his
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cake after his family saying not before So hopefully he
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also waited till after he blew out his candles No
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one likes a birthday spent in the burn ward Pretty
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We can eliminate choice be pretty easily the word had
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tips us off right away that it's trying to be
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past perfect which we already know we don't need this
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one's extra wrong though because i had eight is an
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incorrect conjugation congregations or the different forms that verbs take
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as they shift from one tends to another this one's
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bad because we can never say had eight they only
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say had eaten if you want to see a verb
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tense get even tenser homes trying using bad congregation choice
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he gives us the present perfect which contrary to what
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we might think also refers to things that happened in
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the past Yeah english it's so weird The president perfect
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is on ly used when we don't know exactly when
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something happened For example we might say someone has eaten
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all the cake and then we would probably find that
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someone and make him pay like cake present Perfect doesn't
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work here though because we know jackson ate the cake
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after the song Sure that's not particularly specific either but
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it's Too definite of a timeline for present Perfect The
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best choice here is d the original sentence uses the
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simple past and in this case it's all we need
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Well we need that slice of the cake We keep
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hearing about lots of milk Yeah got shmoop Um
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